Well like most of my first sexual encounters it was kind of premature but the spelling was checked and i liked the fog. it was just over too quickly to know what happened to me. but will check out something else by Clorinda maybe the one about the big motor psychle i loves them fast rice burners :o).

Author's Response: Um, thanks. "Premature," "way-too-fast" and "yay! she can spell" are things I'll keep in mind. I guess I overdo the terseness sometimes, so my stories DO seem as though they've been ripped out of the printer before it finished printing. Thanks for the rap on the window pane of my bubble-world.rnrnPS. I'd really appreciate not being referred to in the third person consistently, it's kinda wierd.

Haha I really enjoyed this! I agree with you, this scene illustrates a long-overdue, awkward-but-logical matter between the two brothers that no other fic I've read has addressed.

I really appreciate your keeping the two in character as well.

It's weird, though, to picture Amon NOT driving. He's always so dominant in most situations; you'd think he would want to take the wheel. Heh, just a random thought.

Author's Response: True enough, but there's Nagira on the other hand, who really *doesn't* let Amon get away with everything and anything ... which is why Amon has to resort to bashing his brother over the head, shooting at him in sewers etcetera. Lolz.